britneyspears.com
Britney's status:
I rehearsed on the tour stage for the first time! It's cooler then I imagined & has a lot of moving parts-can't wait for you to see it!
The word "then" should be replaced with "than." "Then" means next, while "than" is a conjunction used to compare.
The dash to start another sentence is also a problem, but the status is informal, so I'll let her off on that.
I promise that I don't go to this site. I friend found the mistake and told me about it.
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