Wednesday, March 11, 2009

Mistake 21

TimesDelphic.com (March 9, 2009)


Troyer gives Last Lecture

Next, he asked what our strengths are and what we can improve on. Troyer found answers started by looking for people that can be honest with you. 


There are not grammatical mistakes here, but it doesn't make sense. "Troyer found answers started" is almost nonsensical. I would suggest a different verb, but I don't know what the writer is trying to say.

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